today's homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi hi Clara! Good morning!
How are you doing? Well, I had to search and translate the Korean name into English. I found out that her name is Han Bi-ya. Am I correct?
I read from her profile that she is a known travel writer and lead the Emergency Relief Team for World Vision Korea. Seems like she is really a good person since she is helping poor people. And I can see that is why you want to be like her since you also have a good heart.
I\'ll see you later! Enjoy your day!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
If you could be another person for a day, who would you be?
I would be \"한비야\"
>> correct!
>> or: I would like to be \"한비야\".
I really respect to her.
>> I really respect her.
She worked disaster lelief effort.
>> She worked for the disaster relief effort.
I want to be someone that can help someone.
>> I want to be someone who can help someone.
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