today's homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Great Monday morning Clara! How have you been? Did you have a good weekend? Well, I hope so.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts about our topic. The spring weather seems really conducive to always stay happy and beautiful. kkk
Anyway, see you later this morning! Enjoy the rets of the day!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
If you have control of the weather, how should the weather be?
If I control of the weather, I control like spring.
>> If I can control the weather, like to control the spring.
In spring weather is warm and see of the many flower.
>> The weather in spring is warm and I can see many flowers.
you konw? beautiful flower makes me happy a lot.
>> Do you know that beautiful flowers make me a lot?
I like spring weather.
>> I like the spring weather.
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