today's homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What makes any relationship successful? Why do you think so?(2/12)
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I think consideration to other people makes human relationship to succesful way.
People who don't have any consideration always can't understand other people, and
don't try to hear freiends sincere advice or idea. So they are easy to fight.
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Some people are billionaires and have more money than they will ever need, yet other
people are starving and living in the worst sort of conditions. Is this fair? Why/not?
If this situation happend at same condition between two people, I think this is fair.
But most of case, It happend in the unfair situation.
So I think this complex situation is unfair.
And the wealthy people(not only weathy people but most of common people) need to help poor people.
강사 첨삭
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What makes any relationship successful? Why do you think so?(2/12)----I think consideration to other people makes human relationship to succesful way.>>I think consideration to other people makes human relationship succesful way.People who don\'t have any consideration always can\'t understand other people, and >>correct
OR: People who don\'t consider others may have a hard time to understand other people.don\'t try to hear freiends sincere advice or idea. So they are easy to fight.>>Make your own decision.--- (homework at 2.04)Some people are billionaires and have more money than they will ever need, yet other >>correctpeople are starving and living in the worst sort of conditions. Is this fair? Why/not?>>correctIf this situation happend at same condition between two people, I think this is fair.>>correct (Observe the proper spelling of the word HAPPENED^^)But most of case, It happend in the unfair situation. >>But most of the situation, they are unfair.So I think this complex situation is unfair. >>correctAnd the wealthy people(not only weathy people but most of common people) need to help poor people. >>And the wealthy people, even the common people, need to help the poor people.
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