Today's Homework.

2016-08-04 · 첨삭 강사 Lisa

학생이 쓴 원문

Yes, I agree to Benjamin's opinion. If early to bed and early to rise, a day will be long. We will got many times. Many times enable to do many things. but early to bed is not easy.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Mikeee!  You have a good point on the qoutation. I agree with your idea that going to bed earlier than the usual time is not that easy, but I think to get up from bed is a lot harder. hihihihi  Anyway, your sentence construction is good. Keep up the good work! I\'ll see you in a bit.   Yes, I agree to Benjamin\'s opinion. >>> Yes, I agree with Benjamin\'s opinion. (When you agree with someone or something it means you accept the point of someone or something.) If early to bed and early to rise, a day will be long. >>> YOU CAN SAY: A day is longer if we go to bed early and when we rise up early.We will got many times. >>> YOU MEAN: We can get enough time. Many times enable to do many things. >>> YOU MEAN: We will be able to finish tasks. OR: We can do a lot of tasks if we have enough time.but early to bed is not easy >>> but going to bed early is not easy.

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