TODAY'S HOMEWORK
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Each aged people can have their own problems nowadays.
Children's big problems must be studying. Most of children seem sick of studying. After school, many children have to head for cram schools giving up enjoying something like a lot of hobbies and hanging out with friends.
The youth's problems can be diverse. The most serious problem is getting a job. Youth unemployment has been continuously rising. Although someone got a job, if he becomes an irregular worker, he has to taste bitters of life much earlier than expected. Besides this, they can have problems like mandatory military service, a marrage, having babies, and so on.
The middle aged are desperate to survive. They need more money not only to bring up their children, but also to take care of their parents. Nowadays both husbands and wives tend to have jobs, if not, they could not catch up with other people. To make matters worse, if someone becomes fired, all his family are in the face of catastrophe.
One of the big
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When I was young, I thought getting older was a great phase in our life~
I never knew that old people have more serious challenges~
Each aged people can have their own problems nowadays.
>>People of different age groups have different problems nowadays.Children\'s big problems must be studying.
>>CORRECT!
Most of children seem sick of studying.
>>Most children seem sick of studying.
After school, many children have to head for cram schools giving up enjoying something like a lot of hobbies and hanging out with friends.
>>CORRECT!The youth\'s problems can be diverse.
>>CORRECT!
The most serious problem is getting a job.
>>CORRECT!
Youth unemployment has been continuously rising.
>>CORRECT!
Although someone got a job, if he becomes an irregular worker, he has to taste bitters of life much earlier than expected.
>>Although someone gets a job, if he becomes an irregular worker, he has to taste bitterness of life much earlier than expected.
Besides this, they can have problems like mandatory military service, a marrage, having babies, and so on.
>> Besides this, they can have problems like mandatory military service, marriage, having babies, and so on.The middle aged are desperate to survive.
>>CORRECT!
They need more money not only to bring up their children, but also to take care of their parents.
>>CORRECT!
Nowadays both husbands and wives tend to have jobs, if not, they could not catch up with other people.
>>CORRECT!
To make matters worse, if someone becomes fired, all his family are in the face of catastrophe.
>> To make matters worse, if someone becomes fired, all his family members are in the face of catastrophe.One of the big
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