today;'s homework.

2017-07-24 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

It's Ella, 29 years old. i talk with my forigner friends by kakado talk. now it is easy to writing in English when i talk with them. But it is hard to speaking in English when i meet them in real. they told me that i need to practice in speaking and i also felt it to need seriously. i don't have enough chance to speak in English so i hope that i could get chances to speak in English while talking with my teacher. then my speaking English skill will increase much better. i do what i think if i want. so i enrolled this class. but i'm shy. i'm afraid to show my mistake even i know there is nobody not to do mistake. but i believe that i'm going to be better than now. thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ella!

Thanks for your composition today! Whoa! Thanks for doing your homework. I\'m so happy that you checked your feedback for today. I hope you will never lose interest in improving your skills. Way to go!

T. JanE ^^

It\'s Ella, 29 years old.

>> This is [Name]. I\'m 29 years old. 

i talk with my forigner friends by kakado talk.

>> I talk with my foreign friends through Kakao Talk. 

now it is easy to writing in English when i talk with them.

>> Now it is easy to write in English when I chat with them. 

But it is hard to speaking in English when i meet them in real.

>> But it is hard to speak in English when I meet them in person. 

they told me that i need to practice in speaking and i also felt it to need seriously.

>> They told me that I need to practice speaking, and I also feel the need seriously. 

i don\'t have enough chance to speak in English so i hope that i could get chances to speak in English while talking with my teacher.

>> I don\'t have enough chance to speak in English, so I hope that I could get enough while talking with my teacher. 

then my speaking English skill will increase much better.

>> My English speaking skill will be improved much better. 

i do what i think if i want.

>> I do what I want. 

so i enrolled this class.

>> So I enrolled in this class. 

But I\'m shy.

>> Correct

i\'m afraid to show my mistake even i know there is nobody not to do mistake.

>> I\'m afraid to make mistakes even though I know that nobody is perfect. 

But I believe that I\'m going to be better than now.

>> Correct

Thank you.

>> Correct

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