today;'s homework.
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강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ella!
Thanks for your composition today! Whoa! Thanks for doing your homework. I\'m so happy that you checked your feedback for today. I hope you will never lose interest in improving your skills. Way to go!
T. JanE ^^
It\'s Ella, 29 years old.
>> This is [Name]. I\'m 29 years old.
i talk with my forigner friends by kakado talk.
>> I talk with my foreign friends through Kakao Talk.
now it is easy to writing in English when i talk with them.
>> Now it is easy to write in English when I chat with them.
But it is hard to speaking in English when i meet them in real.
>> But it is hard to speak in English when I meet them in person.
they told me that i need to practice in speaking and i also felt it to need seriously.
>> They told me that I need to practice speaking, and I also feel the need seriously.
i don\'t have enough chance to speak in English so i hope that i could get chances to speak in English while talking with my teacher.
>> I don\'t have enough chance to speak in English, so I hope that I could get enough while talking with my teacher.
then my speaking English skill will increase much better.
>> My English speaking skill will be improved much better.
i do what i think if i want.
>> I do what I want.
so i enrolled this class.
>> So I enrolled in this class.
But I\'m shy.
>> Correct
i\'m afraid to show my mistake even i know there is nobody not to do mistake.
>> I\'m afraid to make mistakes even though I know that nobody is perfect.
But I believe that I\'m going to be better than now.
>> Correct
Thank you.
>> Correct
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