Today's homework
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Hi Lorna~
I have a cold now, so I can't be in our class tomorrow.;(
It's getting cold here in Korea.
I hope we can have our class on Friday.
Happy Wednesday:)
Question: What is the minimum voting age in your country?
Our minimum voting age is 19 years old(international age).
So I voted for president in last spring at Embassy of Republic of Korea in China. But sadly, My sister couldn't vote for president because her birthday is in June, and our election was stared at May. In normal, our presidential election is in December. But our last president Ms.Park had some problem, we specially hold the election early in this time. So when Ms.Park didn't get up any mischief, my sister can vote for president in this December. So my sister was really sad for a while at that time.
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Hey there, [이름]!!:)
I\'m so sorry to hear that you are having cold now.
I hope that you will get well soon. You should take care of yourself.
You should take a rest too. I hope to talk to you this Friday!^_^
Happy Wednesday to you as well!!:)
~T. Lorna^-^
Our minimum voting age is 19 years old(international age).
>> Correct!
So I voted for president in last spring at Embassy of Republic of Korea in China.
>> So I voted for president last spring at the Embassy of Republic of Korea in China. (WOW!^^)
But sadly, My sister couldn\'t vote for president because her birthday is in June, and our election was stared at May.
>> But sadly, my sister couldn\'t vote for president because her birthday is in June and our election started last May.
In normal, our presidential election is in December.
>> Normally, our presidential election is held during December.
But our last president Ms.Park had some problem, we specially hold the election early in this time.
>> But our last president, Ms.Park had some problem so we specially hold the election earlier.
So when Ms.Park didn\'t get up any mischief, my sister can vote for president in this December.
>> When Ms. [Name] didn\'t do any mischief then my sister shall vote for president this coming December.
So my sister was really sad for a while at that time.
>> My sister was really so sad for a while because of this incident.
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