Today's homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Lorna~ It's been a while to wrote my homework ;)
What is your biggest goal in life?
My biggest goal in life is world tour. I'd like to travel all around the world. Because South Korea where I was born and lived is very small country, and I have only traveled some of Asia's countries. so I wish to see the whole world. I think the earth is the most beautiful planet, not only it's looks so beautiful, but also human who lives in earth is very various. That's why I keep studying English, and that's why I want to speak English in fleunt.
ps. I'll travel to Vietenam on 25 Nov~ 2 Dec, So I have to stop our class at that time;( I hope to continue our class with you. and Happy Wednesday!^_^
강사 첨삭
Hey there, [이름]!!:)
How are you doing?
Wow!! I hope that you will enjoy your travel to Vietnam.
I want to go and visit there one day as well.
Thank you so much for telling me this in advance!:)
Very good in doing your homework.
I will talk to you this Friday.
~T. Lorna^_^
My biggest goal in life is world tour.
>> My biggest goal in life is to travel the whole world.
I\'d like to travel all around the world.
>> Correct!
Because South Korea where I was born and lived is very small country, and I have only traveled some of Asia\'s countries.
>> Because South Korea where I was born and lived is a very small country and I have only traveled to some of Asian countries.
so I wish to see the whole world.
>> So, I wish to travel the whole world.
I think the earth is the most beautiful planet, not only it\'s looks so beautiful, but also human who lives in earth is very various.
>> I think earth is the most beautiful planet, not only that it looks so beautiful but there also human various kinds of people who lives in it.
That\'s why I keep studying English, and that\'s why I want to speak English in fleunt.
>> That\'s why I keep studying English and that\'s why I want to speak English in fluently.
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