today's homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Please be quiet while the teacher is talking.
She won the second prize.
Your children look very healthy.
Does he play baseball after school?
Because she wanted ot, she bought it.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ms. [이름]!
Thanks for your composition today! You\'re a diligent student and I appreciate your effort. Keep it up!
T. JanE ^^
Please be quiet while the teacher is talking.
>> Correct
She won the second prize.
>> Correct
Your children look very healthy.
>> Correct
Does he play baseball after school?
>> Correct
Because she wanted it, she bought it.
>> Correct
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