Today\'s homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Ms.Fiona,
It is raining in Busan now.
I hate it, but I like it today, because it\'s cool now.
Good night!
HOMEWORK:
In your opinion, what are the most important skills in today\'s job market? Why do you think so?
-> I think most important skill is foreign languages in today\'s job market.
Because regardless of work almost job seekers basically have TOEIC in my country and me too.
These days are global age, so we can meet various foreign everywhere and we can cooperate with them.
In my case, I want to work for trading company, so foreign lanhuages skill is essential.
강사 첨삭
Good evening Ms. [이름]^^
Great that it\'s raining now, I guess it\'s pretty cool there now and it\'s good to have some beer hahaha :)
Hi Ms.Fiona,
>>CORRECT!
It is raining in Busan now.
>>CORRECT!
I hate it, but I like it today, because it\'s cool now.
>>CORRECT!
Good night!
HOMEWORK: In your opinion, what are the most important skills in today\'s job market? Why do you think so?
-> I think most important skill is foreign languages in today\'s job market.
>>I think the most important skill in today\'s job market is learning a foreign a language.
Because regardless of work almost job seekers basically have TOEIC in my country and me too.
>>It\'s because almost all job seekers basically need to take TOEIC and myself included.
These days are global age, so we can meet various foreign everywhere and we can cooperate with them.
>>Because it\'s a global era, you can meet a variety of foreigners everywhere, and you can work with them.
In my case, I want to work for trading company, so foreign lanhuages skill is essential.
>>In my case, foreign language skills are essential because I want to work for a trading company.
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