Today\'s homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Fiona!
I\'ll not be late tomorrow HaHaHa
HOMEWORK:
Do you know anyone who is addicted to video games? If so, please describe this person in 2 or 5 sentences only. Thank you.
->Yes I konw.
She always playing game, sometimes she was up all night games.
But she feel the game is boring or not funny, quit a game for a while.
강사 첨삭
Good evening^^
I was just teasing you Ms. [이름]^^
Anyway, thank you for your hard work!
HOMEWORK:
Do you know anyone who is addicted to video games? If so, please describe this person in 2 or 5 sentences only. Thank you.
->Yes I konw.
>>Yes, I know.
She always playing game, sometimes she was up all night games.
>>She always played games, sometimes all night long.
But she feel the game is boring or not funny, quit a game for a while.
>>But if she feels the game is boring or no longer fun, she pauses for a moment.
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