TODAY\'S HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Fiona~
Good evening
I learned \'magmificent\' from your feedback Thank you!!
HOMEWORK:
Writing Task: Have you ever experienced problems getting a package delivered? If so, please share your story.
-> I never experienced problems getting a package dilivered yet. I think in Korea delivery system is arranged very well.
Of course some of people\'s package is happened broken or missed.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]^^
I\'m happy to hear that you have learned that word today because you always MAGNIFICENT .
I\'m not kidding! ^^ I\'m pretty serious. :)
Hi Fiona~
>>CORRECT!
Good evening
>>Good evening! (Don\'t forget your proper punctuation.)
I learned \'magmificent\' from your feedback
>>I learned the word \"magnificent\" from your feedback!
Thank you!!
>>CORRECT!
Writing Task: Have you ever experienced problems getting a package delivered? If so, please share your story.
I never experienced problems getting a package dilivered yet.
>>I have never experienced problems getting a package delivered yet.
OR: I never experienced problems receiving a package delivered yet.
I think in Korea delivery system is arranged very well.
>>I think the delivery system is very well organized in Korea.
Of course some of people\'s package is happened broken or missed.
>>Of course, some people\'s packages are broken or lost.
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