TODAY\'S HOMEWORK!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, Fiona^^ good evening!
Yesterday I couldn\'t homework becasue I was so tierd..
I went to sleep as [이름]n as finished the class...hahaha
HOMEWORK:
Writing Task: Do you think Kim Jong-un is likely to visit the White House in the future? Why? Why not?
->Um... maybe... yes? he accepted Trump\'s surprise offer on Twitter.
and I also want to see they meet in the White House.
강사 첨삭
Hi^^
No worries about that Ms. [이름], I totally understand.
You needed to rest for you to conquer your next day challenge :)
So, thank you for doing today\'s homework!
Hi, Fiona^^ good evening!
>>CORRECT!
Yesterday I couldn\'t homework becasue I was so tierd..
>>Yesterday, I couldn\'t do my homework because I was very tired.
OR: Yesterday, I wasn\'t able to do my homework because I was exhausted.
I went to sleep as [이름]n as finished the class...hahaha
>>I went to sleep as [이름]n as I finished the class.
Writing Task: Do you think Kim Jong-un is likely to visit the White House in the future? Why? Why not?
->Um... maybe... yes?
>>Maybe yes?
he accepted Trump\'s surprise offer on Twitter.
and I also want to see they meet in the White House.
>>He accepted Trump\'s surprise offer on Twitter and I also want to see them both in the White House.
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