Today\'s homework!
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Question :
Where is your hometown? /
Is your hometown famous for anything
Answer :
I have been living in Gunsan for twenty years.
Gunsan is port city so there is a lot of fish and seafood restaurant.
And there has a wonderful sunset because of positioning the western.
Although there is humid and a little fish smell but it\'s worth coming in gunsan.
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Hi Goni! Thank you for telling me about your hometown. I really appreciate the photos. Check below for the corrections below. Have a good day!~~T.Dee
I have been living in Gunsan for twenty years.
>>CORRECT!
Gunsan is port city so there is a lot of fish and seafood restaurant.
>>Gunsan is a port city so there is a lot of fish and seafood restaurants.
And there has a wonderful sunset because of positioning the western.
>>And, there is a wonderful sunset because it faces the west.
Although there is humid and a little fish smell but it\'s worth coming in gunsan.
>>Although it is humid and there is a hint a of fish scent, it is worth coming to Gunsan.
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