Today\'s homework!
학생이 쓴 원문
Q) Are there any dangers of dieting?
A) A strict diet damages your health.
If you only having some water or just be starving to death, your body is malfuctioning.
So if you would like to have a health diet, you have to do that doing regular exercise and eating proper food.
강사 첨삭
Hello Goni! I absolutely agree with you. People should choose always choose healthy diets. Have a good day!~~T.Dee
A strict diet damages your health.
>>CORRECT!
If you only having some water or just be starving to death, your body is malfunctioning.
>>If you only have some water or just starving yourself to death, your body will malfunction.
So if you would like to have a health diet, you have to do that doing regular exercise and eating proper food.
>>So, if you would like to have a healthy diet, what you have to do is to have regular exercise and eat a balanced diet.
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