Today's homework on Oct 17
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Louise,
I am better than this morning.
I took a medicine but I will catch a cold.
I had a perm 3 month ago so I want to chage my hairstsyle,
I chaged my hairstsyle yesterday.
I cut som hair and had a perm. I paid krw 40,000.
It was very cheap than kangnam.
I went my favorite beauty shop.
I finished myreport today so i am happy.
But after 1 month, the final exam will wait me.
Today's homework.
1. a
2. some
3.some
4. a
5. some
6. an
7. a
8. an
9. a
10. a
강사 첨삭
Hi there! It was my pleasure checking on your composition today and thanks for doing your homework too. Please remember to capitalize the pronoun /I/ if you are using it in a sentence. We will talk more about this on our next class. Goodnight.
T. Louise c\")
Hi Louise,>>>CorrectI am better than this morning.>>>Correct
or
>>>I feel better than this morning.I took a medicine but I will catch a cold.>>>CorrectI had a perm 3 month ago so I want to chage my hairstsyle, I chaged my hairstsyle yesterday.>>>I had a perm 3 months ago but I want to change my hairstyle so I had it changed yesterday.I cut som hair and had a perm.
>>>I had a hair cut and perm.
I paid krw 40,000.>>>I paid 40,000 KRW.It was very cheap than kangnam.>>>Correct
or
>>>It was cheaper than kangnam.I went my favorite beauty shop.>>>I went to my favorite beauty shop.I finished myreport today so i am happy.>>>I finished my report today so I am happy.But after 1 month, the final exam will wait me.>>>But after a month, the final exam awaits me.
Today\'s homework.1. a>>>Correct2. some>>>an3.some>>>Correct4. a>>>some5. some>>>an6. an>>>Correct7. a>>>an8. an>>>some9. a>>> some10. a
>>>Correct
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