Today's Journal
학생이 쓴 원문
Today, I went to my brother's graduation.
It was starting at 10:30, so I had to get ready fast.
The place where it was going to start was the school gym.
During the graduation, I saw him getting a scholarship from the school principal.
After the graduation, we went to an italian restaurant called 'Solemio'.
Then I came home and started reading ' holes'.
Today, the kids in Stanley's camp talked about their dreams with their conselor, Mr. [Name].
Oh, by the way, Mr. [Name] was easy to remember because you can just remember ' pen , dance ,key '.
Anyway, I've learned that everything in the world is hard, but if you keep trying your best, then you can succeed.
That's what I've learned today.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]^^
Thanks for sharing about \'Holes\'. I think you\'re fascinated with it nowadays, that\'s good you always look for things you could learn from in materials you get into your hands. My heart is also glad that you and your brother are exemplary in your studies! Keep that up. Make your God and your parents proud!
T\' Joan^^
Today, I went to my brother\'s graduation.
>> CORRECT!It was starting at 10:30, so I had to get ready fast.
>> It started at 10:30, so I had to get ready fastly.The place where it was going to start was the school gym.
>> The place where it was held was at the school gym. During the graduation, I saw him getting a scholarship from the school principal.
>> CORRECT!After the graduation, we went to an italian restaurant called \'Solemio\'.
>> CORRECT!Then I came home and started reading \' holes\'.
>> Then I came home and started reading \' Holes\'.Today, the kids in Stanley\'s camp talked about their dreams with their conselor, Mr. [Name].
>> Today, the kids in Stanley\'s camp talked about their dreams with their counselor, Mr. [Name].Oh, by the way, Mr. [Name] was easy to remember because you can just remember \' pen , dance ,key \'.
>> Oh, by the way, Mr. [Name] was easy to remember because you can just remember \' pen , dance and key \'.Anyway, I\'ve learned that everything in the world is hard, but if you keep trying your best, then you can succeed.
>> CORRECT!That\'s what I\'ve learned today.
>> CORRECT!
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