Today's Journal
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When I woke up today, my head started to hurt.
Every time I shook my head, The pain was getting even worse.
So after breakfast, I had to take a nap.
When I woke up this time, it was 11:00, and it still was same before I took a nap.
Anyway, I couldn't keep on sleeping for the whole day, since I have a lot to do, I went in to my room.
I filled out a schedule and started studying.
First I studied English then I ate lunch.
I had a honey tea, and then studied Korean.
I feel that Korean is very hard even though it's our countries language.
There are too many phargraphs to read just to solve one problem!
Korean's easy to learn for foreigners in the beginning, but it is really hard to understand for us Koreans.
I don't mean that Korean is a difficult language, but it is hard to read fast.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]^^
Relax^^ You might be having tension headache. The pain you feel might be out of your thought on your busy schedule, so take it easy and take one step at a time. Have a great study time today! I wish you well^^
T\' Joan
When I woke up today, my head started to hurt.
>>CORRECT!Every time I shook my head, The pain was getting even worse.
>> Every time I shook my head, the pain was getting even worse.So after breakfast, I had to take a nap.
>>CORRECT!When I woke up this time, it was 11:00, and it still was same before I took a nap.
>> When I woke up at this time, it was 11:00, and I still felt the same way before I took a nap.Anyway, I couldn\'t keep on sleeping for the whole day, since I have a lot to do, I went in to my room.
>>CORRECT!I filled out a schedule and started studying.
>>CORRECT!First I studied English then I ate lunch.
>>CORRECT!I had a honey tea, and then studied Korean.
>>CORRECT!I feel that Korean is very hard even though it\'s our countries language.\\
>>I feel that Korean is very hard even though it\'s our country\'s language.There are too many phargraphs to read just to solve one problem!
>> There are too many paragraphs to read just to solve one problem!Korean\'s easy to learn for foreigners in the beginning, but it is really hard to understand for us Koreans.
>> Korean is easy to learn for foreigners in the beginning, but it is really hard to understand it for us Koreans.I don\'t mean that Korean is a difficult language, but it is hard to read fast.
>>CORRECT!
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