Today's Journal

2012-02-24 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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☆Today's Journal☆ Today,I woke up early and I went to buy some notebooks and a new pencil case. I had to buy 15 notebooks. Then I went to eat lunch at a small restaurant. After that, I went to buy some useful things in the market with my dad and my brother. We went to a ice cream shop called 'Baskin Robbin's' and bought a medium ice cream. After all the shopping, we finally went home. I was just going to rest before my brother told me to play ping pong with him. So, I played with him for about an hour, then came back. Well, this is what I did mostly today. I have to go to school next week, but I'm really worried about the vacation homework. I still have to write two more summarys, a job list. I also have to study for the test next week, the one that selects your class. I should start studying late again.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]^^ Wow! I especially like the eating part, ice cream! kk Isn\'t it winter in your country? Awesome, you still eat ice cream. Well you got me there, now I wanted to buy ice cream for myself too since it\'s summer in my country. Good job on your writing work. Check out the following ^^ T\' Joan   Today,I woke up early and I went to buy some notebooks and a new pencil case.>>CORRECT!I had to buy 15 notebooks. >>CORRECT!Then I went to eat lunch at a small restaurant. >>CORRECT!After that, I went to buy some useful things in the market with my dad and my brother. >>CORRECT!We went to a ice cream shop called \'Baskin Robbin\'s\' and bought a medium ice cream. >>We went to an ice cream shop called \'Baskin Robbin\'s\' and bought a medium ice cream.After all the shopping, we finally went home. >>CORRECT!I was just going to rest before my brother told me to play ping pong with him.So, I played with him for about an hour, then came back. >>I was just about to rest when my brother told me to play ping pong with him so, I played with him for about an hour, then came back.Well, this is what I did mostly today. >>CORRECT!I have to go to school next week, but I\'m really worried about the vacation homework. >>CORRECT!I still have to write two more summarys, a job list. >>I still have to write two more summaries and a job list.I also have to study for the test next week, the one that selects your class. >>I also have to study for the test next week, the one that decides which class you\'ll be in.I should start studying late again. >>CORRECT!

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