Today's Journal
학생이 쓴 원문
☆Today's Journal☆
Today,I woke up early and I went to buy some notebooks and a new pencil case.
I had to buy 15 notebooks.
Then I went to eat lunch at a small restaurant.
After that, I went to buy some useful things in the market with my dad and my brother.
We went to a ice cream shop called 'Baskin Robbin's' and bought a medium ice cream.
After all the shopping, we finally went home.
I was just going to rest before my brother told me to play ping pong with him.
So, I played with him for about an hour, then came back.
Well, this is what I did mostly today.
I have to go to school next week, but I'm really worried about the vacation homework.
I still have to write two more summarys, a job list.
I also have to study for the test next week, the one that selects your class.
I should start studying late again.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]^^
Wow! I especially like the eating part, ice cream! kk Isn\'t it winter in your country? Awesome, you still eat ice cream. Well you got me there, now I wanted to buy ice cream for myself too since it\'s summer in my country. Good job on your writing work. Check out the following ^^
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Today,I woke up early and I went to buy some notebooks and a new pencil case.>>CORRECT!I had to buy 15 notebooks.
>>CORRECT!Then I went to eat lunch at a small restaurant.
>>CORRECT!After that, I went to buy some useful things in the market with my dad and my brother.
>>CORRECT!We went to a ice cream shop called \'Baskin Robbin\'s\' and bought a medium ice cream.
>>We went to an ice cream shop called \'Baskin Robbin\'s\' and bought a medium ice cream.After all the shopping, we finally went home.
>>CORRECT!I was just going to rest before my brother told me to play ping pong with him.So, I played with him for about an hour, then came back.
>>I was just about to rest when my brother told me to play ping pong with him so, I played with him for about an hour, then came back.Well, this is what I did mostly today.
>>CORRECT!I have to go to school next week, but I\'m really worried about the vacation homework.
>>CORRECT!I still have to write two more summarys, a job list.
>>I still have to write two more summaries and a job list.I also have to study for the test next week, the one that selects your class.
>>I also have to study for the test next week, the one that decides which class you\'ll be in.I should start studying late again.
>>CORRECT!
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