Today's Journal/brainwork

2012-02-14 · 첨삭 강사 Joan

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Today's Journal Today is my graduation day. So today, I didn't have to wear my school uniforms. When I went to school with one my friends, there was no one in the class room. I thougth they went in the gym and we were late, but it just that we came early. Well, today was a great day. I guess today was the last day meeting my friends. I went to a chinese restaurant with my parents after the graduation. Again, today was a good day. BRAINWORK:Fill in the verbs in brackets in the Future Perfect. 1) Anne will have repaired her bike next week. 2) We will have done the washing by 8 o'clock. 3) She will have visited Paris by the end of next year. 4) I will have finished this by 6 o'clock. 5) Sam will have left by next week.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]^^ Congratulations and welcome to high school life! Enjoy the coming days it will be exciting! I\'m happy to hear that you\'ve receieved awards today. I\'m happy for you and I could see your potentials. And for the homework - 5 stars! You got it all correct! very good! T\' Joan^^ Today\'s Journal >>CORRECT!Today is my graduation day. >>CORRECT!So today, I didn\'t have to wear my school uniforms. >>So today, I didn\'t have to wear my school uniform.When I went to school with one my friends, there was no one in the class room. >>When I went to school with one of my friends, there was no one in the class room.I thougth they went in the gym and we were late, but it just that we came early. >>I thought they went in the gym and we were late, but it was just that we came early.Well, today was a great day. >>CORRECT!I guess today was the last day meeting my friends. >> I guess today was the last day of meeting my friends.I went to a chinese restaurant with my parents after the graduation. >>CORRECT!Again, today was a good day. >>CORRECT!BRAINWORK:Fill in the verbs in brackets in the Future Perfect.>>CORRECT!1) Anne will have repaired her bike next week. >>CORRECT!2) We will have done the washing by 8 o\'clock. >>CORRECT!3) She will have visited Paris by the end of next year. >>CORRECT!4) I will have finished this by 6 o\'clock. >>CORRECT!5) Sam will have left by next week. >>CORRECT!

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