today's keep a diary
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, Chloe! I\'m really glad you feel comfortable in my class. ^^ I appreciate you for saying that. Don\'t worry, I will help you improve your English skills. I can see that you are really determined to learn English, especially since you will be in Australia in a month so I will try my best to teach you. Just so you know, it will take time to before you master all the English skills but you can still continue to study even after this class with me, right? ^^ Australia is a English-speaking country so it can be an opportunity for you to apply what you learned and at the same time learn something from there.
Anyway, let\'s try to check your sentences. ^^ Please try to review the corrections in red color.
yesterday , i heard that my english class is frist time.
>>> Yesterday was my first time to study English.
>>> OR: I studied English for the first time yesterday.
i was nervous. but nova is very kind and funny so i studied hard.
>>> I was nervous but Nova is very kind and funny so I studied hard.
maybe later , i\'m might good at english . kkkk
>>> Maybe sooner or later, I will be good in English.
i wish i could.
>>> I wish I could.
now i\'m so tired.. i\'m not in sleep though.
>>> I\'m tired now but I\'m not sleepy though.
uu i want to go to bed and deep sleep
>>> I want to go to bed and have a good night sleep.
i think if i drink some warm milk now , i will deep sleep ..zzzz
>>> I think if I will drink warm milk, I will sleep deeply.
but i\'m too lazy to go to the kichen LOL
>>> However, I\'m too lazy to go to the kitchen.
umm..by the way, i\'m trying to sleep right now,,
>>> I\'m trying to get some sleep right now.
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