Today\'s last day of this week already.

2025-10-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

Today\'s last day of this week aleady. On Monday, I start to studg Power English. First I\'m excited and afraid. But I listen to your voice. Become I more comfotable. After I\'m interesting of talk to you. Like my friend. Thanks to your effort. See you text week. Have a good week.

강사 첨삭

A wonderful Friday to you, Yeon [이름]. Your writing shows effort and a growing understanding of basic grammar. Keep using English every day and keep writing as much as you can. You’re on the right path! ^^ I also appreciate your effort. I believe your hard work will pay off eventually. Enjoy your weekend and have fun with your family! ~Teacher Jane c\", 


Today\'s last day of this week aleady.
>> Today\'s the last day of this week already. 

On Monday, I start to studg Power English.
>> On Monday, I started studying in Power Enlgish. 

First I\'m excited and afraid. But I listen to your voice. Become I more comfotable. 
>> At first, I was excited and afraid, but after listening to your voice, I became more comfortable. 

After I\'m interesting of talk to you. Like my friend.
>> After that, I felt more interested in talking with you like a friend. 

Thanks to your effort.
>> CORRECT 

See you text week. 
>> See you next week. 

Have a good week.
>> CORRECT 
>> OR: Have a good weekend. 

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