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Hello, sir [이름]. :)
Thanks for sharing what your dream is.
I also want to be a businesswoman.
But, I think I don\'t have the skills to run a business.
I also want to make a lot of money. :D
I know you can do it.
I believe in you! ^^,
See you in class. :)
Happily,
Teacher JACEY ^^,
My dreams have changed in Vietnam.
>> Correct!
>> OR : My dreams have changed ever since I set foot in Vietnam.
It is that i want to be a businessman.
>> It is that I want to be a businessman.
>> OR : I want to be a businessman now.
I feel much about experiencing a new world after 20 years of organizational life.
>> I want to experience a new world after 20 years of being in an organization.
I want to make a lot of money.
>> Correct!
And I want to spend money meaningfully.
>> Correct!
I feel infinite possibilities when I look at myself.
>> Correct!
I can do it.
>> Correct!
>> OR : I know I am capable of doing it.
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