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2017-07-04 · 첨삭 강사 Jacey

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My dreams have changed in Vietnam. It is that i want to be a businessman. I feel much about experiencing a new world after 20 years of organizational life. I want to make a lot of money. And I want to spend money meaningfully. I feel infinite possibilities when I look at myself. I can do it.

강사 첨삭

Hello, sir [이름]. :)

Thanks for sharing what your dream is.

I also want to be a businesswoman.

But, I think I don\'t have the skills to run a business.

I also want to make a lot of money. :D


I know you can do it.

I believe in you! ^^,


See you in class. :)


Happily,

Teacher JACEY ^^,



My dreams have changed in Vietnam.
>> Correct!

>> OR : My dreams have changed ever since I set foot in Vietnam.

 

It is that i want to be a businessman.
>> It is that I want to be a businessman.

>> OR : I want to be a businessman now.
 

I feel much about experiencing a new world after 20 years of organizational life.
>> I want to experience a new world after 20 years of being in an organization.


 I want to make a lot of money.
>> Correct!


And I want to spend money meaningfully.
>> Correct!

I feel infinite possibilities when I look at myself.
>> Correct!


I can do it.

>> Correct!

>> OR : I know I am capable of doing it.

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