Today's speak
학생이 쓴 원문
First of all I'm a flexible type of person
which means i can make friends easily
Second I can easily adopt changes
I have positive outlook.
and I am optimistic
So I can overcome adversity easily
Yes this is my first time to apply for this position.
강사 첨삭
HELLO [이름],
Your listening skill is very good.
The sentences are correct.
Keep it up!
Teacher Sophia
Here are your corrections:
First of all, I\'m a flexible type of person which means i can make friends easily.
>> CORRECT
Secondly, I can easily adopt changes.
Secondly, I can easily adopt changes.
>> CORRECT
I have positive outlookand I am optimistic
I have positive outlookand I am optimistic
>> CORRECT
So I can overcome adversity easily
>> So, I can easily overcome adversity.
Yes this is my first time to apply for this position.
So I can overcome adversity easily
>> So, I can easily overcome adversity.
Yes this is my first time to apply for this position.
>> CORRECT
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