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2017-09-28 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

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11 I was a class executive. so i have a great memory of my friends. I lean how to handle people well with my ability to lead and do teamwork.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],
Thank you for writing your answer in question #11.
Have a nice day ahead!
Teacher Sophia
Here are your corrections:
I was a class executive.
>> CORRECT 
so i have a great memory of my friends.
>> So, I have a great memory of my friends.
I lean how to handle people well with my ability to lead and do teamwork.
>> I learn how to handle people well with my ability to lead and do teamwork.

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