Today's summary ~~^^
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강사 첨삭
Great Monday morning Mr. [Name]!
It\'s good to know that you are on a good mood today.
Hope that will continue even at the end of the day. ^_~
With regards to your thoughts bout our discussion on the opinion sample part, somehow, I mostly agree with the things that you have shared.
I would just like to add something.
Well, since the general topic is about great inventions, the first speaker thought of maybe inventing an empathy device which would make the people be more careful of what they say to other people. But the main thing here is about one\'s consciousness when speaking to other people. We have always to be careful on what we utter.
Anyway, thanks for the discussion that we had today!
Take care and enjoy the rest of the day!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
First sample opinion talks about the importance of understanding other thoughts.
>> correct!
He says if we know directly how our actions affected other, we will pay more attention when we talk to other.
>> He says that if we know how our actions directly affect others, we will pay more attention we we talk to others.
For example, If I receive the humiliation from other person I will feel bad.
>> correct!
and It makes me adjust my word.
>> And it makes me adjust my words.
Second opinion talks about the danger of overflow of information.
>> correct!
Currently, We have been faced with a lot of information.
>> Currently, we have been facing a lot of information.
So, We are being confused with which information is true and which information we have to concentrate.
>> So, we are confused on which information is true and which one we have to concentrate on.
>> The problem is not the drought but the overflow of information.
Third opinion speaker has a positive thought about plastic surgery.
>> correct!
He says that through plastic surgery we can look younger than our actual age.
>> correct!
and we can make up ugly birth defects.
Fourth speaker criticizes the printing press.
>> correct!
He insists that the printing press has destroyed our memory and forced us into linear ways of thinking.
>> correct!
It prevent us from thinking creative and it spreads harmful ideas among people.
>> It prevents us from thinking creatively and it spreads harmful ideas among the people.
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