Today's summary
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there again Mr. [Name]!
Great Tuesday morning to you.
I know that you are not feeling feel today so I hope that you will really go to the doctor and ask some medications.
Take good care of yourself too.
As what you have said during our class, you are not getting younger. kkkk
Anyway, thanks for sending the discussion about our topic today.
See you again tomorrow.
Get well soon! God bless!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
In today\'s dialogue, The man and the woman are talking about how will they celebrate woman\'s birthday.
>> In today\'s dialogue, the man and the woman are talking about how will they celebrate the woman\'s birthday.
The man give her a little present and she seems to be satisfied with his present.
>> correct!
To spend great time on her birthday, they agree to go tothe movie theater to watch movie starring Harrison Hord least movie.
>> To spend a great time on her birthday, they agreed to go to the movie theater to watch a movie starring Harrison Ford\'s latest movie.
After finishing watching movie, they are planning to eat out and go dancing.
>> After finishing watching the movie, they are planning to eat out and go dancing.
>> or: After watching the movie, they plan to go out and eat and go dancing.
There is the woman who lose contact with her close friend and the other man is wondering about why she lost contact with her.
>> There is a woman who lost contact with her close friend and the other man is wondering why she lost contact with her.
After her friend Janet\'s divorce, she tried to help with her.
>> After her friend Janet\'s divorce, she tried to help her.
But she was not ready to open her mind.
>> correct!
Unfortunately, she couldn\'t understand her friend\'s behavior refusing her favors.
>> correct!
She should have listened to what she is saying and waited until openning her friend\'s mind.
>> She should have listened to what she is saying and waited until her friend opened her mind.
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