Today's talking
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello again Debby :)
I think almost all people hate cockroach. It looks creepy and disgusting. I will live with mosquito rather than with roach. Is there also cockroach in your home? Fortunately, it is a long time that I saw roach. I hope it never show up in my place now and for ever.
By the way, You've heard my words differently.
I didn't say 'cops' but 'corps'. Is it the matter of my prononciation? :'( I also feel that my skills aren't better than before. Why am I like this? Maybe is it because of the comfortable rest? But don't worry. I will gather myself up soon.
Take care :D
<Essay>
A construction worker is the most dangerous job I think. There are so many risk that is not strange to happen in any time in a construction place. We can see an accident in there in news sometimes. But we can't stop this to happen again.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]^^
You must not think that you are not getting better.
I know that you are improving. I think I did not pick up the correct word earlier. I\'m sorry^^
COPRS [kawr] and COPS [kop] Maybe it\'s the vowel sound.^^
Cheer up and don\'t be happy that it\'s vacation.
I hate roaches too. My funny friend said that slippers are invented to kill roaches.hahahaha
I\'m kidding!^^
Check my corrections. Use the proper tense of verbs.
Take care^^
^^T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you:
Hello again Debby :)
>> CORRECT
OR> Hi there Debby^^I think almost all people hate cockroach.
>> I think almost all people hate a cockroach.
It looks creepy and disgusting.
>> CORRECT
OR> It\'s scary and creepy.
I will live with mosquito rather than with roach.
>> I will live with mosquitoes rather than with a roach.
Is there also cockroach in your home?
>> Is there also a cockroach in your home?
Fortunately, it is a long time that I saw roach.
>> Fortunately, it been a long time that I saw roach.
I hope it never show up in my place now and for ever.>> I hope it will never show up in my place now and forever.By the way, You\'ve heard my words differently.
>> CORRECT
OR> I think your didn\'t hear me clearly.I didn\'t say \'cops\' but \'corps\'.
>> CORRECT
OR> I mentioned \"corp\" not \"cops\".
Is it the matter of my prononciation? :\'(
>> Was it my pronunciation?
I also feel that my skills aren\'t better than before.
>> CORRECT
OR> I think my skills are not like before.
Why am I like this?
>> CORRECT
OR> What is happening to me?
Maybe is it because of the comfortable rest?
>> CORRECT
OR> Is it maybe I got to relax?
But don\'t worry. I will gather myself up soon.>> CORRECT
OR> Be confident in me. I will be better.Take care :D
>> CORRECT
OR> Be careful.^^<Essay>A construction worker is the most dangerous job I think.
>> A construction worker has the most dangerous job I think.
There are so many risk that is not strange to happen in any time in a construction place.
>> There are so many risks that is not strange to happen any time in a construction place.
We can see an accident in there in news sometimes. But we can\'t stop this to happen again.
>> We can see an accident in the news sometimes but we can\'t stop this from happen again.
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