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2014-06-24 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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Hello again Debby :) I think almost all people hate cockroach. It looks creepy and disgusting. I will live with mosquito rather than with roach. Is there also cockroach in your home? Fortunately, it is a long time that I saw roach. I hope it never show up in my place now and for ever. By the way, You've heard my words differently. I didn't say 'cops' but 'corps'. Is it the matter of my prononciation? :'( I also feel that my skills aren't better than before. Why am I like this? Maybe is it because of the comfortable rest? But don't worry. I will gather myself up soon. Take care :D <Essay> A construction worker is the most dangerous job I think. There are so many risk that is not strange to happen in any time in a construction place. We can see an accident in there in news sometimes. But we can't stop this to happen again.

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Hi [이름]^^ You must not think that you are not getting better. I know that you are improving. I think I did not pick up the correct word earlier. I\'m sorry^^ COPRS [kawr] and  COPS [kop] Maybe it\'s  the vowel sound.^^ Cheer up and don\'t be happy that it\'s vacation. I hate roaches too. My funny friend said that slippers are invented to kill roaches.hahahaha I\'m kidding!^^ Check my corrections. Use the proper tense of verbs. Take care^^ ^^T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you: Hello again Debby :) >> CORRECT OR> Hi there Debby^^I think almost all people hate cockroach. >> I think almost all people hate a cockroach.  It looks creepy and disgusting. >> CORRECT OR> It\'s scary and creepy.  I will live with mosquito rather than with roach. >>  I will live with mosquitoes rather than with a roach. Is there also cockroach in your home? >> Is there also a cockroach in your home?  Fortunately, it is a long time that I saw roach. >> Fortunately, it been a long time that I saw roach. I hope it never show up in my place now and for ever.>> I hope it will never show up in my place now and forever.By the way, You\'ve heard my words differently. >> CORRECT OR> I think your didn\'t hear me clearly.I didn\'t say \'cops\' but \'corps\'. >> CORRECT OR> I mentioned \"corp\" not \"cops\". Is it the matter of my prononciation? :\'( >> Was it my pronunciation? I also feel that my skills aren\'t better than before. >> CORRECT OR> I think my skills are not like before.  Why am I like this? >> CORRECT OR> What is happening to me? Maybe is it because of the comfortable rest? >> CORRECT OR> Is it maybe I got to relax? But don\'t worry. I will gather myself up soon.>> CORRECT OR> Be confident in me. I will be better.Take care :D >> CORRECT OR> Be careful.^^<Essay>A construction worker is the most dangerous job I think. >> A construction worker has the most dangerous job I think. There are so many risk that is not strange to happen in any time in a construction place. >> There are so many risks that is not strange to happen any time in a construction place.  We can see an accident in there in news sometimes. But we can\'t stop this to happen again. >> We can see an accident in the news sometimes but we can\'t stop this from happen again.

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