today's task ^^
학생이 쓴 원문
1.It is a serious offence to desert the army.
2.The area was mined for gold since 1900.
3.Diane Fossey was famous for her work with the mountain guerrilla groups in Rwanda.
4.A friar is a type of monk.
5.A mussel is a type of shellfish.
Hi^^
It's getting colder and colder day in Korea.
But Spring is coming soon ^^
강사 첨삭
Hi, Happy New Year. I hope you started your year right. Thank you for sending me this composition. I \'ll talk to you tomorrow.
Teacher Aurora
Here are my corrections:
1.It is a serious offence to desert the army.>>Correct.2.The area was mined for gold since 1900.>>Correct.3.Diane Fossey was famous for her work with the mountain guerrilla groups in Rwanda.>>correct.4.A friar is a type of monk.>>Correct.5.A mussel is a type of shellfish.>>Correct.Hi^^
>>Correct.It\'s getting colder and colder day in Korea.
>>The days here in Korea is getting colder and colder.But Spring is coming soon ^^
>>Correct.
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