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Good morning, Mr. [이름]^^
Sure, let us discuss this issue later^^
Your answer is correct since this questions needs a subjective answer.
However, I believe we need more supporting details :)
Hi Rose,
>>CORRECT!
How are you today?
>>CORRECT!
Can we discuss about the question \"How do you handle stress and pressure?\"
>>Can we discuss the question, \"How do you handle stress and pressure?\"
Below is the answer, but I think it is not the proper answer.
>>Below is the answer, but I don\'t think it is a proper one.
Especially this sentence \"In my experience, the best way of handling stress and pressure is communicating with co-workers
regularly\" is weird.
>>Especially this sentence, \"In my experience, the best way of handling stress and pressure is communicating with co-workers
regularly\" is weird.
Please check it out. See you :)
>>CORRECT!
-> I worked in IT division and usually the works in that field are under pressure.
>>I worked in the IT division and we usually worked in that field under pressure.
>>I worked in the IT division and usually, the tasks in that field are highly stressful.
Therefore, I am very familiar with working under stress and pressure atmosphere.
>>Therefore, I am very familiar with working in a stressful work environment.
In my experience, the best way of handling stress and pressure is communicating with co-workers regularly.
>>CORRECT!
>>(Why do you communication is necessary?)
I actually work better under pressure and I\'ve found that I enjoy working in a challenging environment.
>>I actually work better under pressure and I\'ve found out that I enjoy working in a challenging environment.
Thanks
>>Thanks,
[이름]
>>CORRECT!
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