Today's topic

2017-06-13 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Rose, How are you today? Can we discuss about the question "How do you handle stress and pressure?" Below is the answer, but I think it is not the proper answer. Especially this sentence "In my experience, the best way of handling stress and pressure is communicating with co-workers regularly" is weird. Please check it out. See you :) -> I worked in IT division and usually the works in that field are under pressure. Therefore, I am very familiar with working under stress and pressure atmosphere. In my experience, the best way of handling stress and pressure is communicating with co-workers regularly. I actually work better under pressure and I've found that I enjoy working in a challenging environment. Thanks [이름]

강사 첨삭

Good morning, Mr. [이름]^^

Sure, let us discuss this issue later^^

Your answer is correct since this questions needs a subjective answer.

However, I believe we need more supporting details :)

Hi Rose,
>>CORRECT!
How are you today?
>>CORRECT!
Can we discuss about the question \"How do you handle stress and pressure?\"
>>
Can we discuss the question, \"How do you handle stress and pressure?\"
Below is the answer, but I think it is not the proper answer.
>>
Below is the answer, but I don\'t think it is a proper one.
Especially this sentence \"In my experience, the best way of handling stress and pressure is communicating with co-workers

regularly\" is weird.

>>Especially this sentence, \"In my experience, the best way of handling stress and pressure is communicating with co-workers

regularly\" is weird.
Please check it out. See you :)
>>CORRECT!
-> I worked in IT division and usually the works in that field are under pressure.

>>I worked in the IT division and we usually worked in that field under pressure.

>>I worked in the IT division and usually, the tasks in that field are highly stressful.

Therefore, I am very familiar with working under stress and pressure atmosphere.

>>Therefore, I am very familiar with working in a stressful work environment.

 In my experience, the best way of handling stress and pressure is communicating with co-workers regularly.

>>CORRECT!

>>(Why do you communication is necessary?)

I actually work better under pressure and I\'ve found that I enjoy working in a challenging environment.
>>
I actually work better under pressure and I\'ve found out that I enjoy working in a challenging environment.
 Thanks

>>Thanks,
 [이름]

>>CORRECT!



파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·