Today's Topic is...a foreign woman who scared me. so terrifying.

2012-12-20 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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9. rejuvenate (I'm not sure of this...between rejuvenating and rejuvenate...both of them can be ajdjective...i think) Ok...today i'm really so tired that's because a woman ( maybe I guess she's from india) Anyhow, the problem was that the india woman came to our ski resort with her daughter and went go to the slop that was one of the beginner courses. However, the slope is too stiff for them to run down with sik-equipment. So, they called the patrol team and they could go down the resort. Then, she requested us to refund their charges. But we could not do that since her situation linked to refund-request did not match our company regulation. But what's worse, i made an error that i said to her "who take you to the slope?"...actually, i have tried to express my sympathy to her, but you know... i should have told her "who and why.." As soon as i told her, i apolized her. but her didn' hear me and wrote my name her paper to report to foregin-related facilities. I admit this was my fault.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Thank you for doing your homework. By the way Teacher Alice can\'t come to work today. She has an emergency. I just checked your composition for her. Please go over the corrections. Rejuvenate is a verb while rejuvenating is an adjective. Have a wonderful evening ahead! Hope to see you in class later^^ Thank you so much 9. rejuvenate >>> rejuvenating (I\'m not sure of this...between rejuvenating and rejuvenate...both of them can be ajdjective...i think) >>>(I\'m not sure if this is the correct answer. Between rejuvenating and rejuvenate, i think both of them can be adjective.)Ok...today i\'m really so tired that\'s because a woman ( maybe I guess she\'s from india) >>> Okay, I am really tired today because of a woman who I guess is from India. Anyhow, the problem was that the india woman came to our ski resort with her daughter and went go to the slop that was one of the beginner courses. >>> Anyhow, the problem was that the Indian woman came to our ski resort with her daughter and went to the slope that was for beginner courses. However, the slope is too stiff for them to run down with sik-equipment. >>> However, the slope was too stiff for them to run down with the ski-equipment. So, they called the patrol team and they could go down the resort. >>> They called for the patrol team so that they could go down the resort. Then, she requested us to refund their charges. >>> Then she requested us to refund their charges. >>> OR: She then requested us to refund their charges. But we could not do that since her situation linked to refund-request did not match our company regulation. >>> But we couldn\'t do that since her case does not match our company\'s policy regarding refund-request. But what\'s worse, i made an error that i said to her \"who take you to the slope?\" >>> Worse was that I made an error that I told her, \" Who took you to the slope?\". ...actually, i have tried to express my sympathy to her, but you know... i should have told her \"who and why..\" >>> I actually tried to express my sympathy to her but as you know, I should have asked her who and why. As soon as i told her, i apolized her. >>> As soon as I talked to her, I apologized. but her didn\' hear me and wrote my name her paper to report to foregin-related facilities. >>> She didn\'t hear me and submitted my name in a written report to the office of foreign-related facilities. I admit this was my fault. >>> Correct >>> I admit it was my fault.

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