Today's topic is a Humor.

2011-07-25 · 첨삭 강사 Karla

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Today talks about a humor. The title is 'what happened in the subway'. Usually she was going to the company by subway. Someone touched her butt handed. She was horrified but calm. And she thinked she takes him to trick. So she firmly on her hips and fired at him fart. At the moment, "Oops, Hot". he Shouted. Immediately, he didn't touch her butt and got off by subway. This is 'How to fight from masher on the subway' I want to thank you for a short humor. Have a good day,kelly!

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Hi there! You did a good job in writing this composition! This was truly a humorous situation. I hope you'll have a great evening! T. Kelly   Today talks about a humor. >>Today, our talk was about humor.The title is 'what happened in the subway'. >> The title is 'What Happened in the Subway?'.Usually she was going to the company by subway. >> Usually she goes to the company by subway.Someone touched her butt handed. >> Someone touched her butt.She was horrified but calm. >>Correct And she thinked she takes him to trick. >> And she thought she should trick him.So she firmly on her hips and fired at him fart. >>So she firmly positioned her hips and aimed her fart at him.At the moment, "Oops, Hot". he Shouted. >> At that moment, "Oops, Hot", he shouted.Immediately, he didn't touch her butt and got off by subway. >>Immediately, he let go of her butt and got off the subway.This is 'How to fight from masher on the subway' >>This is 밐ow to Fight Mashers on the Subway?I want to thank you for a short humor. >>CorrectHave a good day,kelly! >>Correct

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