Today's topic is the korea foods.

2011-07-19 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Let's Introduce you to the korea foods. Have you ever eaten the korea foods? Typical korea foods is the kimchi. It is very spicy and salty. But this food is beneficial to our bodies as fermented vegetables.this effects are suppressing diseases, helping digestions and promoting appetites. At next introduce of food,the bulgogi is very delicious.Its taste is sweet and chewing. So everyone likes it.It's korean-style barbecued beef. It is famous that I once liked it also liked the siger Michael Jackson. In addition, korea food is a variety and is unique. I hope you can see the opportunity to eat the korea food to be. Thank you for reading here. Have a nice day.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]. Thank you for your composition today. I really love Korean foods. Thank you for the information that you have shared today. Korean foods are really delicious. Anyway, I hope that you will have a great day today. See you tomorrow.   Let's Introduce you to the korea foods. >> Let me introduce to you Korean foods.Have you ever eaten the korea foods? >> Have you ever eaten Korean foods?Typical korea foods is the kimchi. >> A typical Korean food is kimchi.It is very spicy and salty. But this food is beneficial to our bodies as fermented vegetables. >> It is very spicy and salty. This food is a fermented vegetable which is beneficial to our bodies. this effects are suppressing diseases, helping digestions and promoting appetites.>> It helps in the digestion, it increases your appetite and it prevents you from acquiring diseases. At next introduce of food,the bulgogi is very delicious.Its taste is sweet and chewing. >> Next food that I'm going to introduce is bulgogi. It is very delicious. It tastes sweet and it is soft. So everyone likes it. >> Correct. It's korean-style barbecued beef. It is famous that I once liked it also liked the siger Michael Jackson. >> Korean style beef barbeque is also very famous. Michael Jackson likes Korean style beef barbeque.In addition, korea food is a variety and is unique. >> In addition, Korean foods are unique and there are varieties of food to choose from.I hope you can see the opportunity to eat the korea food to be. >> I hope that you'll have a chance to eat all Korean foods. Thank you for reading here. >>Thank you for reading my composition.Have a nice day. >> Or: Have a great day!  

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