today's vocabulary!

2011-01-24 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi teacher! My voice is so bad when we talking because I woke up that time! I think I should change time! T.T Anyway there are the sentenses! Encounter I encountered a embarassing situation today in horse racing. Bully It's mean to bully a weak person.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름],
How are you doing today? Thank you for doing your homework. I know that you are very busy but you still find time to do it. I really appreciate your effort in the class. With your voice, I think it was good. I just thought at first that you were sick but it definitely well. See you later!
-Verna-
Hi teacher!

>> Correct
My voice is so bad when we talking because I woke up that time!

>> My voice was so bad when we were talking because I just woke up that time!
I think I should change time! T.T

>>Correct
Anyway there are the sentenses!

>> Anyway, here are my sentences:
Encounter

>>Correct
I encountered a embarassing situation today in horse racing.
>>I encountered an embarrassing situation today in horse racing.
Bully

>>Correct
It's mean to bully a weak person.

>>Correct

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