Today's world

Hi there sir!

Modern technology has a lot of advantages but I don\'t like the fact that due to modern gadgets people are forgetting how to converse face to face to their love ones. We have this thinking, \" I could chat with them online or I could call them any time\". People are less sympathetic now. They are more indifferent to what is happening around them. If it\'s like this now, I wonder what will happen in the future. How about you? As you usual you wrote a wonderful piece. Have a great day. See you on Wednesday!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

Today\'s world is a very competitive and challenging.

>> correct!

Competition and challenge can be bring to oneself\'s development.

>> Competition and challenge can bring development to oneself.

Sometimes it is the motive power of development.

>> Sometimes it is the motivational force of development.

But if it is excessive, sometimes it can be bring down ruin.

>> But if it is excessive, sometimes it can bring ruin.

And also, world is very various and has become more transparent.

>> And also, the world is very different and has become more transparent.

The range of people\'s know is much broader than the past.

>> The range of people\'s knowledge is much broader than the past.

People\'s knowledge is the wide, but the depth of the knowledge is a very shallow.

>> People\'s knowledge has become wider but the depth is very shallow.

Especially internet can access to every thing.

>> We can access everything through the internet.

People is very busy, have work to do so much. And it does alone.

>> People are very busy, they have to do so much and they have to do it alone.

The communication on between people is becoming less and less.

>> The communication between people is becoming less and less.

The sociality of people is droping a little by little.

>> The sociability of people is dropping little by little.

People eventually led to aggressive and nervous.

>> People eventually will be more aggressive and nervous.

I think as the outcome that people is not still adapt to a community on internet.

>> I think this is the outcome of people who didn\'t adapt to a community on the internet.

Maybe it can not be adapt forever.

>> Maybe we won\'t adapt forever.

Because Human consciousness and behaviour is accustomed to the time of nature and nature in itsele for thousands of year.

>> Because the human consciousness and behavior is accustomed to the time of nature and nature in itself has been existing for thousands of years.