Today's writing practice
학생이 쓴 원문
If I receive the question about living by sea, I can answer like this.
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I have not lived by sea. But if I could live by sea, it would be nice. I anticipate that people who dislike sea do not exist and especially people who live in a big city may look forward to live near nature. Every morning I could see sun rising from shiny horizon and jog along the beach. Of course all things of the world have a weak point. So, to live near sea also has defects like humid air or pollution that is committed by tourists. However to live in nature might be better than to live in a dreary metro city.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
thank you so much for the comosition you sent me..
The composition was impressive..^^
I commend you for a job well done, so just keep up the good work..
Talk to you again on Monday..
have a great weekend..:)
T.Abby
If I receive the question about living by sea, I can answer like this.>>If I receive a question about living by the sea, I can answer this way.
I have not lived by sea. But if I could live by sea, it would be nice.
>>I havent experienced living by the sea, but if I could live by the sea, it would be very nice.
I anticipate that people who dislike sea do not exist and especially people who live in a big city may look forward to live near nature.
>>I anticipate that people who dislike sea do not exist and especially people who live in a big city may look forward to live near the nature.
Every morning I could see sun rising from shiny horizon and jog along the beach.
>>Every morning I could see the sun rising from the horizon and jog along the beach.
Of course all things of the world have a weak point.
>>Of course, not all things in the world are perfect.
So, to live near sea also has defects like humid air or pollution that is committed by tourists.
>>So, to live near sea also has some disadvantages like feeling the humid air or pollution that made by tourists.
However to live in nature might be better than to live in a dreary metro city.
>>correct!
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