today's writing practice.

2016-02-23 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Have a good day Camila. How are you? Did you feel better than yesterday? I'll wish you are better than yesterday. My working schedule is finally decided today. I'll work this job until friday. So I told my resignation to my co-workers. They all surprised about my resignation. And we'll have a party(?) for my resignation tomorrow. So.. I try to attend next class, But if I drink lots of alcohol, I'll be absenced tomorrow class. I didn't delay my class because I spend my chances already. So If i didn't attend the class of next day, You'd like to take a rest. I'm sorry about that. And I think homework of yesterday is repeated that of Feburary 17th. See you later Camille

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear [이름]... How are you?Thank you so much for sending in your homework... I hope you will always keep up the good work. Take care and have a good night.. PS: I am so sorry about my mistake on your homework... I was just very very sick that I couldn\'t notice that. I am sorry again my dear. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Have a good day Camila.>>correctHow are you? Did you feel better than yesterday?>>correctI\'ll wish you are better than yesterday.>>correctMy working schedule is finally decided today. >>correctI\'ll work this job until friday.>>I will work for this company until Friday/So I told my resignation to my co-workers.>>So I already informed my coworkers about my resignation.They all surprised about my resignation.>>They were all very suprised about my resignation.And we\'ll have a party(?) for my resignation tomorrow.>>correctSo.. I try to attend next class,>>correctBut if I drink lots of alcohol, I\'ll be absenced tomorrow class.>>If i will drink much tomorrow, I will be absent.I didn\'t delay my class because I spend my chances already. >>I couldn\'t delay my class because I already used them before.So If i didn\'t attend the class of next day, You\'d like to take a rest. >>So if I will not be able to attend the class, you\'d better take a rest.I\'m sorry about that. >>correctAnd I think homework of yesterday is repeated that of Feburary 17th.>>correctSee you later Camille >>correct

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