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2014-01-28 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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about for from [이름] at about for at from [이름] Now,New year's day is coming. New year's day is the larggest holiday in korea. During the vacation,I'll experience rail bike and sleep for one day with camping car at the beach. it will be fun

강사 첨삭

Good evening Tom! Happy Tuesday! You are right! New Year\'s Day is coming. I think you are really excited for it. ^^ Wow! I know that you will have fun this holiday. ^^ I never tried rail bike, is it fun? Camping at the beach with bonfire is really great! I hope that you will have a fun vacation and today is our last day. =c I am looking forward to see you again. Take Care! See you in class! Teacher Nina   about >> Correct! for >> Correct! from >> Correct! by >> for at >> Correct! about >> Correct! for >> at at >> about from >> for about >> Correct! Now,New year\'s day is coming. >> Did you mean: New Year\'s Day is coming. >> OR: New Year\'s Day is approaching. New year\'s day is the larggest holiday in korea. >> Correct! ( Spelling check: largest ^^)>> Better: It is the largest holiday in Korea. ( We need to use \"it\" to avoid redundancy. ^^) During the vacation,I\'ll experience rail bike and sleep for one day with camping car at the beach. >> Did you mean: During vacation, I\'ll experience rail bike and camping at the beach. >> OR: I will experience rail bike, camping and spend overnight at the beach.it will be fun >> Correct!

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