today'shomework
학생이 쓴 원문
I had a great weekend today.
Because I go fishing with my family.
But I couldn't catch the fish.
Because the water is too cold.
But I feel good.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Tom!
Wow! I want to go fishing too.
But the weather is not good in my country. Hihihi.
I can still remember the time you showed me a picture that you caught a big fish.
I am so happy that you had a great time with your family.
Please be mindful of your verb tenses. I know you can do it.Teacher Nina
I had a great weekend today.
>> I had a great weekend. Because I go fishing with my family.
>> Becasue I went fishing with my family.But I couldn\'t catch the fish.
>> But I wasn\'t able to catch a fish.Because the water is too cold.
>> Because the water was too cold. But I feel good.
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