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2014-06-23 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I had a great weekend today. Because I go fishing with my family. But I couldn't catch the fish. Because the water is too cold. But I feel good.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Tom! Wow! I want to go fishing too. But the weather is not good in my country. Hihihi. I can still remember the time you showed me a picture that you caught a big fish. I am so happy that you had a great time with your family. Please be mindful of your verb tenses. I know you can do it.Teacher Nina   I had a great weekend today. >> I had a great weekend. Because I go fishing with my family. >> Becasue I went fishing with my family.But I couldn\'t catch the fish. >> But I wasn\'t able to catch a fish.Because the water is too cold. >> Because the water was too cold. But I feel good.

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