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I was busy to go to hospitals last weekend
My mom had waist surgery last friday
and I also went to hospital to see my father in law
He has suffered cerebral hemorrhage since 05.2018, He is staying rehabilitation hospital with my mother in law (as protector)
so My baby was very tired to come along me last week
so she catch a cold now ㅠ
강사 첨삭
Hi Mi Jin! I hope everything will be fine with your father in law, your mother and your daughter as well! Take care of yourself too! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I was busy to go to hospitals last weekend.
>>I was busy going to hospitals last weekend.
My mom had waist surgery last friday
My mom had waist surgery last friday
>>My mom had a waist surgery last Friday.
and I also went to hospital to see my father in law
and I also went to hospital to see my father in law
>>And I also went to the hospital to see my father in law.
He has suffered cerebral hemorrhage since 05.2018,
He has suffered cerebral hemorrhage since 05.2018,
>>He has suffered from cerebral hemorrhage since May of last year.
He is staying rehabilitation hospital with my mother in law (as protector)
>>He is staying in a rehabilitation hospital with my mother in law as his care giver.
so My baby was very tired to come along me last week
so My baby was very tired to come along me last week
>>So my baby got really tired going to one hospital to another.
so she catch a cold now ㅠ
so she catch a cold now ㅠ
>>So she has colds now.
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