Today topic : Harricane and power facilities
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- What is Harricane(equal typhoon):According to the dictionary, Occurred in southwestern Asia and eastern North Pacific Ocean to the buleoonda.Natural disasters faced by mankind of the most significant damage to life and property is one of giving.Damage caused by the wind to break the wood to destroy buildinds, including the amount or damage that is different depending on the wind.
- Come to this season hurricans named by typhoon (Ma-on)
Accoding to papers, it comes to hurricans to call Ma-on in korea when next week.I work in electric power company so I ready to be come in hurricans, for example repairing old faciliaies and keeping the transmission lines. And personally I will be quiet at home untill they pass by the hurricans.I hope this hurricans fastly go through the minimum damage.
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Hello Miss. [Name]. You have a challenging job as an Engineer in an electric power company. Just be safe always especially in times of disasters like hurricane.
See you on Monday.
- What is Harricane(equal typhoon):
>> What is Hurricane?
According to the dictionary, Occurred in southwestern Asia and eastern North Pacific Ocean to the buleoonda.
>> According to the dictionary, it occurs in southwestern Asia and Eastern part of the North Pacific Ocean to the buleoonda.
Natural disasters faced by mankind of the most significant damage to life and property is one of giving.
>> It is a natural disaster faced by mankind which damage properties and even kill people.
Damage caused by the wind to break the wood to destroy buildinds, including the amount or damage that is different depending on the wind.
>>T he strong winds destroy buildings and even break the woods. The gravity of the destruction depends on how strong the wind is.- Come to this season hurricans named by typhoon (Ma-on)
>> This season, there's a typhoon named Ma-on.Accoding to papers, it comes to hurricans to call Ma-on in korea when next week.
>> According to the news, typhoon Ma-on will make its landfall in Korea next week.
I work in electric power company so I ready to be come in hurricans, for example repairing old faciliaies and keeping the transmission lines.
>> I work in an electric power company so I have to make the necessary preparations if the typhoon will hit our country. I am responsible in keeping the transmission lines working.
And personally I will be quiet at home untill they pass by the hurricans.
>> And personally, I have to stay at home until the typhoon will leave our county.
I hope this hurricans fastly go through the minimum damage.
>> I hope that the typhoon will not have a terrible effect to our country.
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