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I would like to suggest them to go Pohang. Pohang is small city in Korea but there are many things to see. The most famous site is 호미곶. It is a park that has special symbolic sculpture. This is 상생의 손 which is on the ocean and, meaning is hand of peaceful coexistence. Many TV program have shot 호미곶 if they come to Pohang. Another attraction is 영일대 beach. There are many restaurant and something to play, so many couples come to this beach. And I recommand that you should go there at night. At night, Special light turn on, and view is so nice. One more special thing is 영일 pavilion. When you take a picture, the light help you to look good. Last thing is POSTECH. they spend a lot of money to landscape gardening. In spring, cherry blossoms cover the university and that time students get relaxed and they eat lunch outside with mat. If you come to Pohang, I am sure that you like Pohang.
Thank you and have a nice day!
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I would like to suggest them to go Pohang.
>> I would like to recommend them to go to Pohang.
Pohang is small city in Korea but there are many things to see.
>> Pohang is a small city in Korea but there are many things to see.
The most famous site is 호미곶.
>> CORRECT
It is a park that has special symbolic sculpture.
>> CORRECT
This is 상생의 손 which is on the ocean and, meaning is hand of peaceful coexistence.
>> This is 상생의 손 which is on the ocean and it means \"hand of peaceful coexistence\".
Many TV program have shot 호미곶 if they come to Pohang.
>> Many TV programs have already taken videos and photos in this place.
Another attraction is 영일대 beach.
>> Another attraction is the 영일대 beach.
There are many restaurant and something to play, so many couples come to this beach.
>> There are many restaurants and things to play. There are many couples who go to the beach.
And I recommand that you should go there at night.
>> I highly recommend that you go there at night.
At night, Special light turn on, and view is so nice.
>> You will see nice lights along the beach.
One more special thing is 영일 pavilion.
>> Another is the 영일 pavilion
When you take a picture, the light help you to look good.
>> The lights give you a good look on the picture.
Last thing is POSTECH. they spend a lot of money to landscape gardening.
>> Last thing is the Postech. They spent much money for the landscapes in the garden.
In spring, cherry blossoms cover the university and that time students get relaxed and they eat lunch outside with mat.
>> In spring, cherry blossoms cover the university and students get to relax and eat lunch under the cherry blossom trees with a mat.
If you come to Pohang, I am sure that you like Pohang.
>> I am pretty sure that you will like Pohang if you will see it.
Thank you and have a nice day!
>> I am pretty sure that you will like Pohang if you will see it.
Thank you and have a nice day!
>> Thank you so much and have a nice day.
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