Todays world is busy to operate itself.
학생이 쓴 원문
I am doing nothing but doing computer.
Computer delivers news and e-mails to me day by day.
It is very fast and accurate.
Also it is very convienient.
On Monday, I was not in a good mood.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Keep on doing your homework to improve your writing and grammar skill. Way to go!^_^
Todays world is busy to operate itself.
>>>Today\'s world is busy to operate itself.
I am doing nothing but doing computer.
>>>I\'m using my computer when I\'m not doing anything.
Computer delivers news and e-mails to me day by day.
>>>A computer delivers news and e-mails to me day by day.
Also it is very convienient.
>>>It\'s also very convenient.
On Monday, I was not in a good mood.
>>>Last Monday, I was not in a good mood.
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