TOEIC

To graduate my guraduate school, I must get 800 grade more in TOEIC. Actually, I didn't need TOEIC grade because my undergraduate school didn't need the grade. But now I need it. So I'm studying buring the midnight oil with my whole spirit. I don't know why people study TOEIC without readying for getting a job. I think that TOEIC don't need to build up English skill. But, now I... I.... Anyway, I had studied it for last two weeks before I took an exam. While I studied, I felt that TOEIC became easiler more and more. Wehn I took the exam, I felt that I could get 800. So I am just waiting the grade. God, plsease- come and take my hand.

Hi there! Thank you so much for your composition today! You made a spectacular answer. Good job! I enjoy reading your sentences. I appreciate your effort in doing your homework. Keep up the good start! I placed corrections and the explanation for each mistakes. Please try to review them for your improvement. By constant pratice and perseverance, I know you\'ll be at par with native English speakers. We can do it! We are almost there! Catch you later :) ~T. Nica^^ To graduate my guraduate school, I must get 800 grade more in TOEIC. >> To be able to graduate in my graduate school, I must get a grade of more than 800 in TOEIC. (Pease take note on your sentence structuring) >> To be able to gradaute with flying colors in my graduate school, I must get a grade of more than 800 in TOEIC. (Pease take note on your sentence structuring)Actually, I didn\'t need TOEIC grade because my undergraduate school didn\'t need the grade. >> Actually, I don\'t need a high score in TOEIC, because my undergraduate school didn\'t need that kind of grade. But now I need it. So I\'m studying buring the midnight oil with my whole spirit. >> But now I need it. So, I\'m studying hard, trying to excell in all aspects of my being.I don\'t know why people study TOEIC without readying for getting a job. >> I don\'t know why people need to study TOEIC, specially those people who\'s not yet ready to apply for a decent job. (Plese take note of the paraphrasing) I think that TOEIC don\'t need to build up English skill. >> I think that in TOEIC, you don\'t need to build up your English skills. But, now I... I.... >> But, now I.. (Please continue yout sentence. Formal writing should be in proper sentence structuring)Anyway, I had studied it for last two weeks before I took an exam. >> Anyway, I studied TOEIC for the last two weeks before I took the exam. While I studied, I felt that TOEIC became easiler more and more. >> While I was studying, I felt that TOEIC is much easier than before. Wehn I took the exam, I felt that I could get 800. >> When I took the exam, I felt that I could get an 800 grade. So I am just waiting the grade. >>So, I\'m just waiting for the result.God, plsease- come and take my hand. >> Correct >> OR God, please help me.