Toeic speaking

before i will study Toeic speaking i practiced that please correct my mistakes This picture looks beach my gulls are flying on the sky and many people is standing there i can't see people clearly but i think a woman is feeding gulls on the right side of this picture and i think many peole see feeding gulls around her this picture looks like happy atmosphere

Helo there my dear.. Its nice to know that you are doing your utmost best to learn and study TOEIC.  Just keep up the good work. Here are some of the corrections I noted on your composition. I hope itll be of big help. T.Donabefore i will study Toeic speaking i practiced that >>Before I study TOEIC, Ill be practicing the following:please correct my mistakes This picture looks beach  >>This picture looks like a beach.my gulls are flying on the sky >>There are many gulls flying on the sky.and many people is standing there i can't see people clearly  >>At the background of the picture, we can also see many people standing.but i think a woman is feeding gulls on the right side of this picture and i think many peole see feeding gulls  >>On the right side of the picture, we can see a woman feeding the gulls.around her this picture looks like happy atmosphere >>I think the people are enjoying the very beautiful place in this beach. (Conclusion)