Tokyo Olympics{03/13}

2020-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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I want Tokyo Olympic to host. Because Corona Virus is week to warm. So Corona Virus will disapper! I want to see Olympic. And I wanted It to host!

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Jean~~

I want Tokyo Olympic to host.

Because Corona Virus is week to warm.

>> I want Tokyo to host the Olympics because warmer weather slows down the spread of the coronavirus.

So Corona Virus will disapper!

>> So the coronavirus will gradually disappear!

I want to see Olympic. And I wanted It to host!

>> I want to see the Olympics and want Tokyo to host it.

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