Tokyo trip #3

Dear [이름]!!

Thank you so much for your compositions!! I enjoyed reading about your trip in Japan!!

~Teacher Megan~

We\'re going to go \"Shibuya\", the hot shopping place that the twenties and thirties usually drop by and one of the most crowded area in Tokyo.

>>> We went to \"Shibuya\", a hot shopping place that the twenties and thirties usually drop by and one of the most crowded area in Tokyo.

I was surprised that we could see a number of people when we took off the subway.

>>> Correct.

and I feel amazed their awesome shopping places.

>>> and I feel amazed at their awesome shopping places.

 One building is a complex for only fancy stuff with sixth floors, all of stuffs are very cute are delicate, it\'s hard to select items.

>>> One building complex is only for fancy stuff with sixth floors, all of stuffs are very cute and delicate, it\'s hard to select items.

 After we hung around a few department stores half the day, we ate sandwiches and coffee for lunch at cafe which is 10 minutes away from the main street.

>>> After we hanging around on a few department stores for half day, we ate sandwiches and coffee for lunch at a cafe which is 10 minutes away from the main street.

 There\'s a reason to walk there.

>>> Correct.

This cafe is famous for instagram users, we\'ve often seen their photos at Instagram.

>>> Correct.

My wife especially like an egg sandwich, it was very smooth and well-baked. Our next target was Omotesando.

>>> Correct.

 there are many luxury shop and gorgeous cafe along the street. we can\'t afford to pay for luxuries, we just went window shopping.

>>>  there are many luxury shop and gorgeous cafe along the street. we can\'t afford to pay for luxuries, so we just went window shopping.

 but we could enjoy an fresh atmospehere of street.

>>>  but we could enjoy an fresh atmosphere while on the street.