Tokyo trip #4

Hello [이름]!!

I could see that you made the most of your date trip!! Your compositions says so!!

~Teacher Megan~

HERE ARE MY CORRECTIONS:

We went to Kichijoji which places nearby the Gibri museum, famous for its diplays for animation of Hayao.

>>> We went to Kichijoji  a place nearby the Gibri museum, famous for its diplays for animation of Hayao.

We can see procedures of making animation film and a lot of artworks they drew on their own.

>>> We saw the procedures of making animated films and a lot of artworks that they drew on their own.

 We\'re really love to visit there, cause we\'re big fan of Hayao\'s animation, unfortunately we couldn\'t purchase tickets to Gibri museum.

>>> We really loved to visit it, cause we\'re big fan of Hayao\'s animation, unfortunately we couldn\'t purchase tickets to Gibri museum.

 it was already fully booked.

>>> Correct.

 But aside from that museum, Kishijoji is the best living area, in which young people\'re looking forward to live first recently.

>>> Correct.

Above all, there are very clean streets that we can walk leisureley, and a lot more trendy shop that strangers to be paid attention.

>>> Above all, there are very clean streets that we can walk leisurely, and a lot more trendy shop that strangers paid attention too.

We had a great time there after we took the subway to Shinjuku.

>>> Correct.

\"Shinjuku\" is a totally diferent city, at which I could see a legion of people whenever I stared anywhere.

>>> Correct.

We tried to go window-shopping at department stores, but crowded people makes us exhausted.

>>> Correct.

We came back to Hotel with some snack, and enjoyed watching TV.

>>> We went back to Hotel with some snack, and enjoyed watching TV.