Tokyo trip #5

Dear [이름] !!!

All your compositions about your trip are really exciting to read. I got to know more about Japan. Thanks!!

~Teacher Megan~

HERE ARE MY CORRECTIONS:

The 5th date was our last day of the trip. we went to Jiyugaoka, which has almost same atmosphere as Kichijoji.

>>> The 5th date was also our last day of the trip. we went to Jiyugaoka, which has an almost the same atmosphere as Kichijoji.

 that day was Monday, we could walk leisurely without lots of people. We arrived there at 10am before almost of all stores are being opened.

>>>  that day was Monday, we could walk leisurely without meeting lots of people. We arrived there at 10am before almost of all of the stores open.

 The weather was very clear, we had a bread with sweet smell as a breakfast.

>>> Correct.

and we dropped by many charming and cute stores along the street, small but beautiful.

>>> and we dropped by at many charming and cute stores along the street, they are small but beautiful.

we had a lunch at restaurant, popular for Japanese. A kind couple manages restaurant, at which we can eat hamburg steak cooked in traditional way.

>>> we had a lunch at a restaurant it is popular for Japanese. A kind couple manages the restaurant, at which we can eat hamburger steak cooked in traditional way.

 It was the most delicious dish that I ate in Japan.

>>> Correct.

I really enjoyed lunch, even though I queue up for a long time.

>>> Correct.

our last destination was Nakameguro, there are many stores placed by using space under the railroad.

>>> Correct.

and we went to a beerhouse to drink several kinds of beer nearby there. Every kinds of beer has different tastes.

>>> lastly, we went to a beerhouse to drink several kinds of beer. Every kinds of beer have different tastes.

and then, we came back to hotel to prepare going back Korea.

>>> and then, we went back to the hotel to prepare for our flight going back Korea.