Tommorrow is go to Jamsil baseball stadium:Report

2017-08-17 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Tommorrow I will go to the baseball staidum.It's raining.But I hope tommorrow is not rain too much.I don't want to see the game is cancled. I can go there by my bike. It takes 30 minutes. KIA tigers is on a top now but the game is left for 37. Tigers can go to Postseason but to keep the top this game is important.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


It\'s another game for your favorite team!

Good luck! I hope KIA Tigers will be on the top.

Go cheer for them. ^__^

Let\'s pray that the weather will be nice tomorrow.

Good night!


_Teacher Dianne ^^


Tommorrow I will go to the baseball staidum.

>> I will go to the baseball stadium tomorrow.

It\'s raining.But I hope tommorrow is not rain too much.

>> It\'s raining, but I hope it will not rain heavily tomorrow.

I don\'t want to see the game is cancled.

>> I don\'t want to see the game being canceled.

>> or: I don\'t want the game to be canceled.

I can go there by my bike.

>> correct

It takes 30 minutes.

>> correct

KIA tigers is on a top now but the game is left for 37.

>> KIA tigers is on the top now, but there are still 37 games left.

Tigers can go to Postseason but to keep the top this game is important.

>> KIA Tigers can go to the post season, but to keep on the top of this game is the most important.

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